Although this is not the end of my road,
I feel I am confided To the escapes of my mind,
Feeling these jagged walls Pressing tighter more and more,
This suffocation, Is too much to bare without your name…
I watch from distant skies as you,
Fall away…
Dull vision in empty picture frames,
They won’t fade…
I watch from distant skies as you,
Fall away…
I,
Will follow passions flame,
Until the end of my days,
For as long as the fires remain,
My heart will speak your name.
Fallen,
Away,
See past the skies…
Fallen,
Away,
See past the skies…
I really liked this a lot. It reminded me of a song called Hemorrhage by a band named Fuel, because of the part about falling away, and the constant pattern of falling, and skies, etc. My favorite part was "Feeling these jagged walls Pressing tighter more and more,
ReplyDeleteThis suffocation, Is too much to bare without your name…" It really is just a catchy cool line.
This poem seems to be about a person, whom the author misses a lot and cannot forget. It gives off an impression that the author feels passionate about that specific person. Nice descriptive work with relevant rhymes.
ReplyDeleteI feel as if this is talking about a person who has lost a loved one. I really like the use of the words because it can be interpreted in many ways.
ReplyDeleteI like it but I don't get the picture frame line.
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