stray,
stray from rivers deep,
rivers deep of opal apathy.
take it from me,
from me, and forever till,
till rivers tier and stand.
breath,
breath fresh elements,
elements of one; life.
turn back,
turn back too, given skies of waters shallow,
shallow was, but new suns rise over that cast none.
stray,
stray from rivers deep,
rivers deep of opal apathy.
take it from me,
from me, and forever till,
till rivers tier and stand.
breath,
breath fresh elements,
elements of one; life.
It won't be for ever,
only a moment in eternity,
eternal ever-lasting.
I like how this poem brings up the importance of time in association with decisions. I'm guessing the shallow waters represent the safer decisions.
ReplyDeleteI love the symbolism in this poem. Really good job
ReplyDeleteThis poem has a lot of meaning to it. Its a bit confusing to figure out exactly what its about, at least in my opinion, but overall seem like a good poem.
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