As i fall, may my hands brace me,
let pebble and stone whisper pain.
As i fall, may my eyes stay open,
let light increase but not to consume.
As i weep, may my tears be pure,
let life sprout from pain released,
And as i fall let me be a lesson,
May you witness my rise; and self, learned.
As i fall, may my hands brace me,
ReplyDeletelet pebble and stone whisper pain.
As i fall, may my eyes stay open,
( I can almost picture this happening, great imagery, keep up the good work, this was something different from the other poems i read. )
Very interesting poem, i love the way its written. It seem like its a life lesson. Good work i really like it.
ReplyDeleteThis was really interesting. "As i fall, may my hands brace me,let pebble and stone whisper pain." just felt really deep and in a weird way I understood exactly what you were trying to say. I thought this was awesome eventhough it was really short.
ReplyDelete"let life sprout from pain released,
ReplyDeleteAnd as i fall let me be a lesson," I enjoyed this poem very much, it contains the elemental struggle of existence while pertaining to hope of rising and overcoming those struggles and falls.